One night a person named Nuke was on a boat with a nuke when he suddenly found land but there was a house. So Nuke pulled over.Well he pulled over a person came out of the house. He had a computer, he was tall and skinny, had a green shirt and black pants.He also had long brown hair. “Who are you. Shouted Nuke. “My name is deer and bye bye.” he said.Then he used his computer and started typing. Then Nuke heard a sssssssssss. Then Nuke wondered what was going to happen next.
next time I will make it more creepier.
I did not like it because we could only write the start of the story
I learned about suspense.
I liked that we got to choose what ever we want to write.